Caligula's Launderette

Hey Jess! I mostly go by CL, or Kelle, or the Hyper Alien SPEW Monkey, or even Yo Deaf Woman. Welcome to YWS, if you have any questions what so ...

Actually 'manoeuvred' is correct, it's english, just as Jack. :wink: I'll try to clarify some stufferoos. 1. last line in second stanza, I chose to insert a dash after dis ...

EBM, really, where in SD? Hahaha I have airconditioning.

San Diego, California

Yes, most everyone, Henry Roseden especially. - Regan ( Guttersnipe ) What does the word obtuse me to you?

Miss Regan, she reads all these wonderfully gorry horrid tales of men turning into cockroaches. - Ani ( Guttersnipe ) What is your favorite drink?

So okay, shoot me, I forgot to bring my crit for this again. But I wanted to touch on a few things first. 1. Detail dumping: You have a tendency ...

I stole le baby! I stole le baby!

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you guys on your comments. Thank you all for what you had to say, and for being the impromptu Guttersnipe ...

Hmm... there are some spelling mistakes noticeably in the second poem. I'll print this out and see if I can help. ;)

JIM: A unicorn, huh? —aren’t they extinct in the modern world? LAURA: I know! JIM: Poor little fellow, he must feel sort of lonesome. - The Glass Menagerie , Tennessee ...

serenity

Heehee! I read the entire trilogy on vacay in Ireland, took me less than a business week. Cery just has bad luck with women - real bad luck. Sonea gesturing ...

Greetings and Salutations dahling! If you have any questions about anything at all, feel free to PM me. Cheerios, CL

I have this printed for a proper crit, I just keep forgetting it at my house so I can scan it in. :)